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"I can't believe I watched this I'm bored to tears."
It's a cute little story. Well actually it's a cute LOONG-ass story, but it still seems to be very shallow. I can see that much work went into making this, but that's because it's sooo long. It's way too long and everything takes too long to happen. Releasing this in a couple of episodes and more work put into each episode would've been a better choise.
The graphics are very very simplistic. Actually they are so simplistic that they seem to be more sketches than what should be the final artwork. Just ugly at times. The animation is well done in a couple of occasions, but dull and boring most of the time. Just like the colours(or lack of them) and the landscapes.
The music is nothing exciting and the sounds are your basic stock sounds.
The plot would be all right for a Saturday morning cartoon, if it wasn't so dull and boring. Cute, though.
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I FUCKIN HATE RWD YOTAM PERL IS LETES GOA GAY GAY
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lets go
Author's Response:
I SHALL LAY YOU THRICE.
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All is very swell. The ending just crowns this! I'm glad that it was more than just you basic saturday morning joke in there. Made me chuckle.
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Oh man this was grreat! I enjoyed this little loop. You managed to create quite the appropriate atmosphere with the backround sounds and graphics and the animation and the whole presentation were top-notch.
I also got a kick out of the easter egg and the little story behind it. Keep up.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! The sounds were of real babies crying just warped to sound like death grunts... Thanks for watching!
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This is so beautiful to my eyes. I wish i could just wrap it in becon and eat it up.
EXCEPT FOR THAT MOTHERFUCKING CHOO CHOO TRAIN IN THE BACKROUND! >:C
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Fucking ace! I laughed the whole thing through. You must've spent a good while making this because that's just not your basic fbf.
THIS IS INSANE! It's going straight to my favourites NAO!
Music was good. Animation was excellent. Humour was out of control. Drama was eye watering. I liked it so much I ripped my tights.
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Funn-hay! Everything in it was just a bunch of bollocks and violence. That's why you get only a six.
And bonus points for the teahcer's loose jaw.
Author's Response:
the jaw was worth 4 points?
sweet
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I can really see you had fun while making this. There's lots of abstract images and shapes going hand-in-hand with the groovy beat which is always a blast.
While the fbf could have a little bit more detail and polish, it's still better than lot of the work on this site. It looked very nice. With practice you'll some day animate miraculous things.
The only problem with the flash would be the repetitiveness at some points(like with the buildings), but that's not such a big of a deal. I liked the ending too.
Overall: Ghewd jawb! I give you six stars to lower your average! :D Hahaha!
Author's Response:
It's an upside-down six, you silly cabbage. :D
And thanks for the support. It really does mean alot when it comes from the person who inspires you. :)
I'll work on polishing up the FBF here and there on my next project. Hope you get to see that, too. :)
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Once again, great animation and well thought out story. The only thing missing is the colours, but it doesn't matter that much in this film.
Magnificent job.
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